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RE: AM corrections

From: Williams, Stuart <skw@hplb.hpl.hp.com>
Date: Tue, 3 Apr 2001 09:08:27 +0100
Message-ID: <5E13A1874524D411A876006008CD059F19239C@0-mail-1.hpl.hp.com>
To: "'Jean-Jacques Moreau'" <moreau@crf.canon.fr>
Cc: Mark Jones <jones@research.att.com>, Yves Lafon <ylafon@w3.org>, xml-dist-app@w3.org
Hi Jean Jacques,

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jean-Jacques Moreau [mailto:moreau@crf.canon.fr]
> Sent: 03 April 2001 08:32
> To: Williams Stuart; Mark Jones; Yves Lafon; xml-dist-app@w3.org
> Subject: Re: AM corrections
> 
> 
> Stuart,
> 
> A repost of my earlier comments. Typos are not listed again.
> 
>   1. There are still some occurrences of XMLP_INTERMEDIARY and
>      XMLP_DATA.

I'd regard those two as typo's in that it is something that I should have
caught before posting the document on 30th April. This is fixed in the
working copy.

>   2. In the long run, Fig2.2 may be better positioned before Fig2.1
>      (but yes, this requires rewriting the text...)

I think that one is debatable... at worst its a cosmetic change.
I would be inclined to leave this as it is for this release.

>   3. Issue 4 seems to be addressed by Fig2.2.

Correct. Issue 4 has been deleted from the working copy.

>   4. Message subfields might be better listed in the following order:
>      Message.Blocks, Message.Attachements, Message.Faults, instead of:
>      Message.Faults, Message.Blocks, Message.Attachements. (The normal
>      operation of the protocol is block processing, not fault
>      processing.)

Basically cosmetic, but an easy change to make.
> 
> Jean-Jacques.

Thanks,

Stuart
Received on Tuesday, 3 April 2001 04:08:45 GMT

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