- From: Williams, Stuart <skw@hplb.hpl.hp.com>
- Date: Tue, 3 Apr 2001 09:08:27 +0100
- To: "'Jean-Jacques Moreau'" <moreau@crf.canon.fr>
- Cc: Mark Jones <jones@research.att.com>, Yves Lafon <ylafon@w3.org>, xml-dist-app@w3.org
Hi Jean Jacques, > -----Original Message----- > From: Jean-Jacques Moreau [mailto:moreau@crf.canon.fr] > Sent: 03 April 2001 08:32 > To: Williams Stuart; Mark Jones; Yves Lafon; xml-dist-app@w3.org > Subject: Re: AM corrections > > > Stuart, > > A repost of my earlier comments. Typos are not listed again. > > 1. There are still some occurrences of XMLP_INTERMEDIARY and > XMLP_DATA. I'd regard those two as typo's in that it is something that I should have caught before posting the document on 30th April. This is fixed in the working copy. > 2. In the long run, Fig2.2 may be better positioned before Fig2.1 > (but yes, this requires rewriting the text...) I think that one is debatable... at worst its a cosmetic change. I would be inclined to leave this as it is for this release. > 3. Issue 4 seems to be addressed by Fig2.2. Correct. Issue 4 has been deleted from the working copy. > 4. Message subfields might be better listed in the following order: > Message.Blocks, Message.Attachements, Message.Faults, instead of: > Message.Faults, Message.Blocks, Message.Attachements. (The normal > operation of the protocol is block processing, not fault > processing.) Basically cosmetic, but an easy change to make. > > Jean-Jacques. Thanks, Stuart
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