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Re: AM corrections

From: Jean-Jacques Moreau <moreau@crf.canon.fr>
Date: Tue, 03 Apr 2001 09:32:09 +0200
Message-ID: <3AC97C79.DCAC77BA@crf.canon.fr>
To: Williams Stuart <skw@hplb.hpl.hp.com>, Mark Jones <jones@research.att.com>, Yves Lafon <ylafon@w3.org>, "xml-dist-app@w3.org" <xml-dist-app@w3.org>
Stuart,

A repost of my earlier comments. Typos are not listed again.

  1. There are still some occurrences of XMLP_INTERMEDIARY and
     XMLP_DATA.
  2. In the long run, Fig2.2 may be better positioned before Fig2.1
     (but yes, this requires rewriting the text...)
  3. Issue 4 seems to be addressed by Fig2.2.
  4. Message subfields might be better listed in the following order:
     Message.Blocks, Message.Attachements, Message.Faults, instead of:
     Message.Faults, Message.Blocks, Message.Attachements. (The normal
     operation of the protocol is block processing, not fault
     processing.)

Jean-Jacques.
Received on Tuesday, 3 April 2001 03:33:27 GMT

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