[Bug 3764] R-250: 2E PER: Comments on rcase-MapAndSum

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3764

           Summary: R-250: 2E PER: Comments on rcase-MapAndSum
           Product: XML Schema
           Version: 1.0 only
          Platform: Macintosh
        OS/Version: All
            Status: NEW
          Keywords: unclassified
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Structures: XSD Part 1
        AssignedTo: cmsmcq@w3.org
        ReportedBy: cmsmcq@w3.org
         QAContact: www-xml-schema-comments@w3.org


[This issue was originally raised by Eric J. Schwarzenbach in March
2004.]

My comments relate to 

http://www.w3c.org/TR/2004/PER-xmlschema-1-20040318/#rcase-MapAndSum 

I'd like to request that rcase-MapAndSum.2 be rephrased to make it more 
readable. There are a number of places in the these documents that suffer the 
same sort of human-parseability problems but this sentence is particularly 
egregious. 

[See the original email for details on the issues and suggested wording
changes:
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-xml-schema-comments/2004JanMar/0080.html]

[Because the disposition of this issue is likely to take different forms in 
XML Schema 1.0 and XML Schema 1.1, I am making a twin of bug 2242.  Bug
2242 will relate to XML Schema 1.1, and this one to XML Schema 1.0.]