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[2E PER] Out of date references in PER-xmlschema-2-20040318

From: Masayasu Ishikawa <mimasa@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 09 Jul 2004 18:07:33 +0900 (JST)
Message-Id: <20040709.180733.41653511.mimasa@w3.org>
To: www-xml-schema-comments@w3.org

Hello,

First, apologies for submitting comments on 2E PER long after review
period has ended.  I believe the following comments are editorial and
hopefully less controversial.

In "H References" of Part 2, several references need to be updated.

H.1 Normative

- "Unicode Database" refers to the Unicode 3.1.0 Character Database at:

    http://www.unicode.org/Public/3.1-Update/UnicodeCharacterDatabase-3.1.0.html

  but the latest version is 4.0.1, available at:

    http://www.unicode.org/Public/4.0-Update1/UCD-4.0.1.html

  Referring to Unicode 4.x may be a bit controversial, as XML 1.0
  Third Edition refers to Unicode 3.1 (and 3.2).  But the XML Schema
  spec also says:

    ... However, implementors are encouraged to support the character
    properties defined in any future version.

  So it would be helpful for implementors to also provide a reference
  to the latest version at

    http://www.unicode.org/Public/UNIDATA/UCD.html

  without mentioning a specific version number.

- "XML 1.0 (Second Edition)" refers to an old Working Draft.
  This reference needs to be updated to refer to the Third Edition at:

    http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-xml-20040204

- "Character Model" refers to an old Working Draft, and "3.2.17 anyURI"
  includes a reference to section 8 "Character Encoding in URI References".
  "Character Model" draft has been updated and splitted into two pieces,
  and the latest version is "Character Model for the World Wide Web 1.0:
  Fundamentals", available at:

     http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/WD-charmod-20040225

  and the relevant section is now 7, not 8.

- "IETF INTERNET-DRAFT: IRIs" refers to an old Internet Draft published
  in 2002.  It should refer to the latest version at:

    http://www.w3.org/International/iri-edit/draft-duerst-iri-08.txt

- "Ruby" refers to an old Working Draft.  This reference needs to be
  updated to refer to the Recommendation at:

      http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/REC-ruby-20010531

- "XSL" refers to an old Candidate Recommendation.  This reference needs
  to be updated to refer to the Recommendation at:

      http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/REC-xsl-20011015/

Regards,
-- 
Masayasu Ishikawa / mimasa@w3.org
W3C - World Wide Web Consortium
Received on Friday, 9 July 2004 05:07:35 UTC

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