XML schema draft comments: pt.1 3.15.2 typo, punctuation, picky grammar

Regarding the draft at
http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/PER-xmlschema-1-20040318/:


Section 3.15.2 says:

   The blockDefault, finalDefault, attributeFormDefault,
   elementFormDefaultand targetNamespace attributes...

(Note the missing space.)

It also says:

    ...constructed 'by hand', for instance via ...

Per standard English punctuation rules, that should be:

    ...constructed "by hand," for instance via ...

(since it's just a phrase and not a character string, in which
case putting the comma inside the quotes would imply the comma
was in the string).


The text also says:

   Aside from <include> and <import>, which do not correspond
   directly to any schema component at all, each of the
   element information items which may appear in the content
   of <schema> corresponds to a schema component, and all
   except <annotation> are named.

That second "which" should probably be "that."



Daniel