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XML schema draft comments: pt.1 3.15.2 typo, punctuation, picky grammar

From: Daniel Barclay <daniel@fgm.com>
Date: Wed, 16 Jun 2004 12:27:23 -0400
Message-ID: <40D074EB.3000204@fgm.com>
To: www-xml-schema-comments@w3.org

Regarding the draft at
http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/PER-xmlschema-1-20040318/:


Section 3.15.2 says:

   The blockDefault, finalDefault, attributeFormDefault,
   elementFormDefaultand targetNamespace attributes...

(Note the missing space.)

It also says:

    ...constructed 'by hand', for instance via ...

Per standard English punctuation rules, that should be:

    ...constructed "by hand," for instance via ...

(since it's just a phrase and not a character string, in which
case putting the comma inside the quotes would imply the comma
was in the string).


The text also says:

   Aside from <include> and <import>, which do not correspond
   directly to any schema component at all, each of the
   element information items which may appear in the content
   of <schema> corresponds to a schema component, and all
   except <annotation> are named.

That second "which" should probably be "that."



Daniel
Received on Wednesday, 16 June 2004 12:27:54 UTC

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