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minor comments for WD-xptr-20010108

From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
Date: Sun, 14 Jan 2001 18:09:11 -0800
Message-Id: <p05010400b6880ab745be@[204.210.33.45]>
To: www-xml-linking-comments@w3.org
Here are just a few minor comments on your Last Call Working Draft
of XPointer [1].

The RFC 2119 key words are listed under 3, but are used throughout.
Would it make more sense to place that definition under 1.2?

In 4.2.1 and 5.4.2, whitespace -> white space (if you want to
follow XML 1.0, see http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#sec-white-space).

In A.2 References, I imagine that you will update the editors and
date of XIS.

Deleting rowspan="1" colspan="1", and the thead and tbody elements
from the tables in 4.1.3 will save a few bytes in file size. Is
there some kind of production script that inserts these? It's
hardly a problem in XPointer, but adds up in other XML specs with
more tables.

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/WD-xptr-20010108/

Best wishes for your project,

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