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Re: Section 3.4 grammar problem

From: Eve L. Maler <elm@east.sun.com>
Date: Mon, 21 Feb 2000 15:02:17 -0500
Message-Id: <4.2.0.58.20000221150202.009bb790@abnaki.East.Sun.Com>
To: Elliotte Rusty Harold <elharo@metalab.unc.edu>
Cc: www-xml-linking-comments@w3.org
Oops, thanks.  Would "...before being dereferenced" be better?

         Eve

At 02:52 PM 2/21/00 -0500, Elliotte Rusty Harold wrote:
>In section 3.4 of the current XLink working ddraft you'll find the
>sentence "The URI-reference must be receive XML Base [XBASE] processing
>before being traversed to."
>
>
>This is ungrammatical and needs to be cleaned up. Perhaps you meant "The
>URI-reference must receive XML Base [XBASE] processing before being
>traversed to." but even that is less clear than it should be.
>
>
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