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Comments for CR-xml-infoset-20010514

From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
Date: Sun, 20 May 2001 16:01:42 -0700
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To: www-xml-infoset-comments@w3.org
These are really minor typos in your Infoset Candidate Recommendation [1].
Below, a section name or number is followed by a quote and a suggestion.

Status of this document
www-xml-infoset-comments@w3.org; An
www-xml-infoset-comments@w3.org; an

1. par. 4
information items (the information set
information items; (the information set

1. par. 7
upper case
uppercase

1. Base URI par. 2
[XML Base]
<a href="#XMLBase">[XML Base]</a>

In 2. par. 1, it might be nice to state the obvious.
     For ease of reference, each property is given a name, indicated
     [thus] .
becomes:
     For ease of reference, each property is given a name, indicated
     [thus]. Links to a definition and/or syntax in the XML 1.0
     Recommendation [XML] are given for each information item.

2.5 par. 1
place-holder
placeholder

B. par. 2
XML Information Set (numbers
XML Information Set; (numbers

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/CR-xml-infoset-20010514/

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