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Suggested editorial changes for IRI and Multipart styles

From: Lawrence Mandel <lmandel@ca.ibm.com>
Date: Tue, 11 Jul 2006 23:48:24 -0400
To: www-ws-desc@w3.org
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I have two editorial changes (again that are not meant to change the 
meaning of the statements) that I'd like to recommend for the IRI and 
Multipart style sections of the WSDL adjuncts. I identified these proposed 
changes while creating tests for the test suite. I've attached a patch 
that contains my suggested changes.

Section 4.2

1. "The sequence MUST contain only local element children. These child 
elements MAY contain the nillable attribute."

This assertion contains both an assertion and a suggestion. I suggest 
splitting the assertion and suggestion.

"The sequence MUST contain only local element children." "These child 
elements MAY contain the nillable attribute."

Section 4.3

2. "The sequence MUST contain only local element children. These child 
elements MAY contain the nillable attribute, and the attributes minOccurs 
and maxOccurs MUST have a value 1.? "

This assertion contains 2 assertions and a suggestion. I suggest splitting 
the assertions and suggestion.

"The sequence MUST contain only local element children." These child 
elements MAY contain the nillable attribute." "The attributes minOccurs 
and maxOccurs MUST have a value 1 for these child elements".? 

Thanks,

Lawrence Mandel

Software Developer
IBM Rational Software
Phone: 905 - 413 - 3814   Fax: 905 - 413 - 4920
lmandel@ca.ibm.com



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