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Comments for WD-speech-grammar-20010820

From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
Date: Sun, 23 Sep 2001 20:33:12 -0700
Message-Id: <p05100302b7d4577e7c42@[192.168.123.102]>
To: www-voice@w3.org
Here are just a few additional comments for your speech grammar Last
Call Working Draft [1]. The comments [2] that I sent you for the last
Last Call Working Draft have not been addressed yet and still stand.
Sorry for any overlap. If I can be of assistance getting them all
incorporated into your next publication, please let me know.

Globally, white-space and whitespace -> white space (if you want to
follow XML 1.0, see http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#sec-white-space).

Globally, working draft -> Working Draft and working group -> Working
Group to match the W3C Process document
(see http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process/)

Globally, Media type -> media type

Below, a section number is followed by a quote and then a suggestion.

Abstract
representating
representing

2.1
aka
a.k.a.

2.2.2
http header
HTTP header

specifes
specifies

2.3
The comment in the final XML example should be marked up
<!-- --> not //

2.4.1
Please move references to an informative references section.

2.5
Although it both ABNF and XML support
Although both ABNF and XML support

In 2.7, this sentence is irregular:
   In situations where applications target a multilingual user
   community it may be needed for grammars contain words in different
   languages.
could read:
   In situations where applications target a multilingual user
   community, grammars that contain words in different languages
   may be needed.

2.7
Multiple language
Multiple languages

3.1 and 4.1
semi-colon
semicolon

3.2
referencable
referenceable (or reword)

4.1.3
a alias reference
an alias reference

4.1.5
tag-format declaration
tag format declaration

4.2
http header
HTTP header

4.2 (twice) and 4.3
preceed
precede

F.
XML Form grammar to the Augmented BNF Form
XML form grammar to the augmented BNF form
(or change "forms" in Appendix G)

H.
Please move the reference to a references section.

concatention (twice)
concatenation

Speech Recognition Grammar Format
Speech Recognition Grammar format


[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/WD-speech-grammar-20010820/
[2] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-voice/2001JanMar/0005.html

Best wishes for your project,
-- 
Susan Lesch - mailto:lesch@w3.org  tel:+1.858.483.4819
World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) - http://www.w3.org
Received on Sunday, 23 September 2001 23:33:16 GMT

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