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Review of 13 Nov 2007 "Associating Resources with Namespaces"

From: Norman Walsh <ndw@nwalsh.com>
Date: Wed, 13 Feb 2008 14:41:16 -0500
To: www-tag@w3.org
Message-ID: <m27ih8lk4j.fsf@nwalsh.com>
Here are my comments:

* The third bullet in the list at the start of the preface should refer
  to "Functions and Operators" not "Data Model", I think.

* I think the phrase "and many other uses..." at the end of the last bullet
  should come after the list, not as part of that bullet.

* The sentence in section 2 that begins "Here's an expanded example of the
  DocBook model above..." seems to end abruptly with "using [N3], with two ."

* In the last paragraph of section 2, just before section 3, there seems
  to be something wrong with the following sentence: "On the one hand
  we have...one for the purpose of normative, and the non-normative reference."

* I think the first paragraph of section 4 is a bit hard to parse. Maybe
  it could be reworded?

* In the middle of the first paragraph of section 4.2, "Some namespaces in
  this category already do this, for example t." seems like something got
  dropped.

Ship it!

                                        Be seeing you,
                                          norm

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