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Re: [SVGMobile12] Not sure what section 15.2 paragraph 2 is saying

From: Andrew Shellshear <Andrew.Shellshear@cisra.canon.com.au>
Date: Thu, 09 Mar 2006 18:14:07 +1100
Message-ID: <440FD5BF.10602@cisra.canon.com.au>
To: www-svg@w3.org

Hi Boris,

Regarding your email 
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-svg/2006Jan/0443.html:

> The first sentence of this paragraph is [1]:
> 
>    Scripting languages (such as ECMAScript) that have a notion of a
>    "global scope" or a "global object" such that a single global object
>    must be associated with the document (unique for each uDOM Document
>    node).
> 
> This sentence fragment has a subject ("languages"), then a subordinate clause 
> describing the subject, then nothing.  There is no verb.  I'm not sure what the 
> sentence is trying to say.
> 
> -Boris
> 
> [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/SVGMobile12/script.html#ScriptElement

You're quite right, of course.  We've changed the sentence as follows:

>    Some scripting languages such as ECMAScript have a notion of a
>    "global scope" or a "global object" such that a single global object
>    must be associated with the document (unique for each uDOM Document
>    node).

Please let us know shortly if that does not address your concern.

(And by the way, thanks for such an excellently formatted comment!)

Andrew.
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