- From: Andrew Shellshear <Andrew.Shellshear@cisra.canon.com.au>
- Date: Thu, 09 Mar 2006 18:14:07 +1100
- To: www-svg@w3.org
Hi Boris,
Regarding your email
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-svg/2006Jan/0443.html:
> The first sentence of this paragraph is [1]:
>
> Scripting languages (such as ECMAScript) that have a notion of a
> "global scope" or a "global object" such that a single global object
> must be associated with the document (unique for each uDOM Document
> node).
>
> This sentence fragment has a subject ("languages"), then a subordinate clause
> describing the subject, then nothing. There is no verb. I'm not sure what the
> sentence is trying to say.
>
> -Boris
>
> [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/SVGMobile12/script.html#ScriptElement
You're quite right, of course. We've changed the sentence as follows:
> Some scripting languages such as ECMAScript have a notion of a
> "global scope" or a "global object" such that a single global object
> must be associated with the document (unique for each uDOM Document
> node).
Please let us know shortly if that does not address your concern.
(And by the way, thanks for such an excellently formatted comment!)
Andrew.
Received on Thursday, 9 March 2006 07:14:17 UTC