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Minor comments for CR-css-tv-20020807

From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 7 Feb 2003 21:16:14 -0800
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To: www-style@w3.org

Hello,

These are minor editorial comments for your CSS TV Profile 1.0
Candidate Recommendation [1].

For the status section (most of these will go away):
s/Status of this document/Status of This Document/
s/2002 May 15/15 May 2002/
s/Last Call Review/Last Call review/
s/the exit criteria is met/the exit criteria are met/
s/a web browser/a Web browser/
s/UA/user agent (UA)/ (for first occurrence)
s/publically/publicly/

I saw only two typos:
In 2, HTML 4.0 [HTML40] needs a link.
In 7, s/stylesheets/style sheets/

In Acknowledgments:
s/members of the CSS working group/participants in the CSS Working Group/
(to match the Process Document, see
http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process-20010719/groups.html#GroupsWG)

RFC 2119 key words can be marked up like this:
http://www.w3.org/2001/06/manual/#RFCs
(This is especially true for this module. "TV-UA MUST" is hard to read.)

Normative references should 1) point to dated specs, and 2) have no
live URI links. Here is the guideline for citing references:
http://www.w3.org/2001/06/manual/#References

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/CR-css-tv-20020807

Best wishes for your project,
-- 
Susan Lesch           http://www.w3.org/People/Lesch/
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