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LC comment for SpecGL : 'Typos, grammar, etc.'

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Date: Wed, 12 Mar 2003 01:19 +0900
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Here is a last call comment from Lynne Rosenthal (lynne.rosenthal@nist.gov) 
on QA Framework : Specifications Guidelines (and Examples and Techniques)
received by the LC form system.

Submitted on behalf of: Ian Jacobs
Comment type: Editorial
The comment applies to: "Overall"
Comment title: Typos, grammar, etc.

Comment:
GL 3, 2md para, Remove: "Overall, the intent of the WG should be clear" This doesn't add anything

CP 7.1, 7.4, 7.5 ConfReq, last sentence:  change 'is' to 'are' in "...if there is no deprecated feature"

CP8.4 Rationale: change 'identifying' to 'identify' 

CP9.1, last para: "This is strict conformance" is a repeat of text in intro of GL9

CP 11.4, last para: modify "proper use of the conformance icons" to "proper use of any conformance icons"

GL13, last para: suggest switching the order of Manual of Style and PubRules 

Proposed resolution : 

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