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Minor comments for WD-xhtml-m12n-schema-20021209

From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
Date: Sat, 8 Feb 2003 02:56:57 -0800
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To: www-html-editor@w3.org

Hello,

These are minor editorial comments for your "Modularization of XHTML in
XML Schema" Last Call Working Draft [1]. If they are too late to be
useful, please feel free to ignore them.

s/members of the W3C/Members of the W3C/
s/(members only)/(Members only)/
s/members of the XML Schema Working Group/participants in the XML
Schema Working Group/
(that is to match the Process Document, see
http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process-20010719/groups.html#GroupsWG)

"Schema" is only capitalized when referring to the spec.

s/XML Schema are XML documents/XML schemas are XML documents/
s/XML Schema have/XML schemas have/
s/XML Schema are/XML schemas are/
Schema-based or schema-based (not both)
s/IN XML Schema/In XML Schema/
s/Attribute lists/attribute lists/
s/Schema modules/schema modules/
s/xml declaration/XML declaration/

I would use these same table attributes from section 2 in section 3:
     cellspacing="3" cellpadding="3"

s/as they part of/as they are part of/
s/required in XHTML 1.1/required in XHTML 1.1./

D.1. seems to repeat 3.1.

Kudos to the person(s) who did the references. They are beautiful.

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/WD-xhtml-m12n-schema-20021209/

Best wishes for your project,
-- 
Susan Lesch           http://www.w3.org/People/Lesch/
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