Chapter 4

In the initial three bullet points I suggest you standardise either on lower 
case or upper case as the initial letter of the text of the bullet point.

4.3.5, fourth last line - Insert "to" between "expected" and "optimize"

4.4.1, numbered item 3. - The phrase "Nodes that have an associated ...". 
Delete "an" or change rest of sentence to singular.

4.4.4, numbered item 1 - Reference is made to XPath but the link is to XSLT. 
Please review for consistency.

4.4.4, numbered item 2, line 2 - Replace "an" with "and"

4.4.4.1 Replace "xform:" with "xforms:"

Andrew Watt

Received on Tuesday, 12 February 2002 15:45:57 UTC