I know I'm late going through these, but I think it's appropriate to continue editorial refinements as we move between CR and PR. Overall, I think your proposed improvements are terrific. There's one I would roll back (presuming it happened: I'm offline and can't get to the latest CR draft): You propose: * S2.4, P1: Change "by the combination of [local name] and [namespace]" to "by the XML qualified name" Though I like this use of "qualified name" in principle, I don't think we've introduced it in a rigorous manner, have we? Lacking that, I think the original is less ambiguous. Some might read the revised as applying to the {prefix,lname} pair. I'd revert to the original. Thanks. ------------------------------------------------------------------ Noah Mendelsohn Voice: 1-617-693-4036 IBM Corporation Fax: 1-617-693-8676 One Rogers Street Cambridge, MA 02142 ------------------------------------------------------------------Received on Saturday, 14 December 2002 00:02:14 GMT
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