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RE: More editorial tweaks

From: Henrik Frystyk Nielsen <henrikn@microsoft.com>
Date: Thu, 5 Dec 2002 15:07:52 -0800
Message-ID: <68B95AA1648D1840AB0083CC63E57AD6097C68D9@red-msg-06.redmond.corp.microsoft.com>
To: "Martin Gudgin" <mgudgin@microsoft.com>, "W3C Public Archive" <www-archive@w3.org>, "Jean-Jacques Moreau" <moreau@crf.canon.fr>, "Marc Hadley" <marc.hadley@sun.com>, "Nilo Mitra" <EUSNILM@am1.ericsson.se>, "Noah Mendelson" <noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com>


Overall status: all done except 8 and 9.

>1.	Section 1
>
>	The language we use for bullet 4 doesn't match the other bullets

Match is now slightly better 

>2.	Section 2.1
>
>	"this, if any" should read "thus, if any"

Already done

>3.	Section 3.1.1
>
>	We should put a cross-ref to Part 1 at the end of 
>numbered bullet 2.

done

>4.	Section 3.1.6
>
>	"considered to be of unspecified size" should read 
>"considered to have a single dimension of unspecified size"

done

>5.	Section 3.1.7
>
>	For consistency we should say the type is enc:valueType

done

>6.	Section 4
>
>	We should drop "only" from "not limited only to the 
>SOAP HTTP Binding" 

done

>7.	Section 4.2.2
>
>	First bullet should be removed ( left over text )

Alredy done

>8.	Section 4.2.2
>
>	The numbered bullets use the term 'terminal node', but 
>that term no longer exists in the data model. We should 
>rewrite in terms of nodes with a lexical value.

NOT DONE

>9.	Section 4.4
>
>	The language in the numbered bullets doesn't seem 
>consistent with other language concerning infoset items

NOT DONE

>10.	Section 5.1.1
>
>	First bullet has an example which is a QName ( should be a URI )

Already fixed (example removed)

>11.	Section 5.1.2
>
>	Diagram. Should the cloud with "Net" in it read "Network"?

I can live with "Net" but not a biggie

Henrik
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