Re: [Moderator Action] Typing mistakes

Hi David,

thank you for your feedback! As I was just working on the tutorials, I have changed the sentences in our development version. We expect to roll out an update to the main W3C site soon.

Best, Eric

For documentation purposes, the link to the GitHub commit: https://github.com/w3c/wai-tutorials/commit/2f25a940c4d11b25e8f51ea190940c0d1530f555

On 6 Dec 2016, at 21:25, David Apps wrote:

> Hello
>
> Thank you so much for providing such excellent resources.
>
> I have some feedback about the following page:
>
> https://www.w3.org/WAI/tutorials/images/functional/
>
> 1. I think that "initated" should be "initiated". (It is curious that your spell checker did not pick up this one.)
>
> 2. "provided by in the link text" probably should use "by" or "in" but not both.
>
> 3. Perhaps "representation on the image" should be "representation in the image", but I am not at all certain about this and I would probably rewrite the phrase as "meaning conveyed by the image". (Note that I am blind and so I cannot actually tell whether this is the meaning conveyed by the image, but I am guessing that it is, based on the context.)
>
> I hope that this helps
>
> David




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Eric Eggert
Web Accessibility Specialist
Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) at World Wide Web Consortium (W3C)

Received on Wednesday, 7 December 2016 15:20:20 UTC