Re: EOWG: Substantially updated Standards Harmonization document

Shawn,

Thanks for the review.

I have marked replies on your edit suggestions in the attached 
document for anywhere I wasn't using your comments.

- Judy

At 11:05 PM 6/23/2011 -0500, Shawn Henry wrote:
>  Hi Judy,
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>It's really coming together!
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>Please find attached a document with suggestions tracked as changes.
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>Regards,
>~Shawn
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>On 6/23/2011 2:11 AM, Judy Brewer wrote:
>>Dear EOWG:
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>>I have substantially updated the standards harmonization draft. For 
>>active EOWG participants, it is now a complete draft that is ready 
>>on the weekly agenda for your review prior to and discussion during 
>>this Friday's EOWG meeting.
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>>I believe that this takes care of the great majority of the 
>>feedback received to date. This took longer than expected; thank 
>>you to those who were on review standby earlier in the week. Please 
>>let me know if I've missed feedback. Thank you also to Sharron for 
>>her proposed revisions of the last section, and to all for your 
>>suggestions during our recent meetings.
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>>Please use the survey form below when you comment as it will help 
>>in collection and management of comments:
>>http://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/35532/StdsHarmon201106June/
>>(Comments in email are fine if the survey isn't open yet, though it 
>>should be shortly.)
>>
>>For change requests that seem clear and straightforward to make, 
>>and that people have a chance to send by Thursday COB US Eastern 
>>time, I will try to address these by Thursday night in advance of 
>>our meeting on Friday and will indicate what changes I have made. 
>>For those active participants who don't have a chance to send 
>>review comments before the meeting, comments soon afterwards to the 
>>extent possible would still be helpful, given the time-limited 
>>offer we've received for translation help.
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>>I look forward to your comments and our discussion on Friday.
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>>Many thanks,
>>
>>- Judy
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>>Director, Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI), World Wide Web Consortium (W3C)
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