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Survey comments & questions

From: Yeliz Yesilada <yesilady@cs.man.ac.uk>
Date: Wed, 30 Jul 2008 15:38:53 +0100
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Cc: wai-eo-editors@w3.org
To: Lisa Pappas <Lisa.Pappas@sas.com>

Hi Lisa,

Thanks so much for your comments in the surveyed. I have addressed  
most of your comments, however I have a question for the following  
two (see YY below):

priority: editor's discretion
location: Perceivable, table, row 3
current wording:
Mobile users often in public places (trains, hotel lobbies) turn off  
sound; often in noisy places (streets, nightclubs) can't hear.
suggested revision:
Mobile users often turn off sound in public places (trains, hotel  
lobbies) or in noisy places (streets, nightclubs).
rationale:
reads more clearly, better translation

YY: If I make the suggested change, then that will change the  
meaning, but would you be happy if I change it like this: "Mobile  
users cannot hear because they turn off sound or  they are in public  
places such as train stations and hotel lobbies."

priority: editor's discretion
location: Global, MWBP 1.0 columns
current wording: links are in all caps, not initial caps, as others  
(WCAG 1 and 2)
suggested revision: Use initial caps in link text to MWBP 1.0
rationale: Readability, consistency

YY: In the original Mobile Web Best Practices (MWBP) document, they  
are capitalised and to keep it consistent, I would prefer to keep  
them capitalised. Would you mind if we keep them capitalised or would  
you like to discuss this at the EO meeting?

Regards,
Yeliz
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