[wbs] response to 'EOWG Call for Review: Why Standards Harmonization is Essential to Web Accessibility, 2006 March'

Here are the answers submitted to 'EOWG Call for Review: Why Standards
Harmonization is Essential to Web Accessibility, 2006 March' (Education
and Outreach Working Group) for Pasquale Popolizio.



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Why Standards Harmonization is Essential to Web Accessibility
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 * ( ) I accept this version of the document as is
 * (x) I accept this version of the document, and suggest changes below
 * ( ) I accept this version of the document only with the changes below
 * ( ) I do not accept this version of the document because of the
comments below
 * ( ) I abstain (not vote)





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Comments
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Comments on the document, formatted as described above.

Comments (or a URI pointing to your comments): 
priority: editor's discretion
location: Current Situation - Fragmentation Driver: item #2
current wording: "A belief that only local guidelines can meet the needs
of the local disability community"
suggested revision: "The belief that only local guidelines can meet the
needs of the local disability community"
rationale: change first word "A" into "The"


priority: editor's discretion
location: Current Situation - Fragmentation Driver: item #3
current wording: "A belief that the needs of people with disabilities
outside a country are different or not relevant"
suggested revision: "The belief that the needs of people with disabilities
outside a country are different or not relevant"
rationale: change first word "A" into "The"


priority: editor's discretion
location: Consequences - Browsers, Media Players, and Assistive
Technologies - first paragraph, tird sentence
current wording: "Browser and media players' lack of conformance to
the..."
suggested revision: "Browsers and media players' lack of conformance to
the..."
rationale: change first word "Browser" into "Browsers"




These answers were last modified on 15 March 2006 at 10:10:52 U.T.C.
by Pasquale Popolizio

Answers to this questionnaire can be set and changed at
http://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/35532/harmon/ until 2006-03-18.

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