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Re: [wbs] Roberto Castaldo response to 'EOWG Call for Review: Evaluation Resource Suite, 2005 September'

From: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2005 10:00:20 +0200
Message-ID: <432A7B94.2090007@w3.org>
To: r.castaldo@iol.it
Cc: wai-eo-editors@w3.org

Hi Roberto,

Thank you for reading the documents and completing the WBS form. Since we are already clearly emphasizing the word "not" in the header of this section, re-emphasizing it in the last sentence may be too negative. Also, we are emphasizing the word "determine" in that sentence which I think has higher importance for the message we want to convey. Do you agree?


WBS Mailer on behalf of <r.castaldo@iol.it> wrote:
> ---------------------------------
> Selecting Tools page
> ----
> 
> 
> Comments (or a URI pointing to your comments): 
> priority: [editor's discretion] 
> location: paragraph "What evaluation tools can not do"
> current wording: Web accessibility evaluation tools can not determine the
> accessibility of Web sites, they can only assist in doing so.
> suggested revision: Web accessibility evaluation tools can <i>not</i>
> determine the accessibility of Web sites, they can only assist in doing
> so.
> rationale: I'd like to put in evidence the word "not", in order to make
> also visually clear the limitation we're talking about. 

Regards,
  Shadi


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