Harvey, Thank you for your review and comments on the business case. I will post a revised version with your changes and other's changes soon. Replies to your comments are below surrounded by brackets []. Let me know if you want to discuss any of them. Regards, ~ Shawn [DONE] 1. Update copyright notices to end through 2004 2. References [added to changelog to link specific checkpoints] Add WCAG reference even though the overview general reference section was removed. [added to changelog to link specific technologies] Technical Factors -- mentions many W3C technologies -- give top-level the reference to http://www.w3.org where they can be found. [did not find smooth way to reference this] Suggest referencing Dublin Core -- particularly as it is addressing accessibility. [did not find smooth way to reference this] Also the work on EARL from the Evaluation and Repair group, which uses RSS. 3. Editorial Lint:Received on Tuesday, 13 April 2004 13:29:49 GMT
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