Your fingers may have been flying out of sync with your brain! Second para, first sentence: organizations (sp) by full a by a full Introduction: Third sentence: change "to commitment" to "for committing" Third paragraph: "guideance" "guidance" Technical Factors ..."reduce" use gerunds to get parallel styles: "reducing" (2), ...enabling, ... preparing .. Financial Factors clean up text. "including direct cost savings, reduced initial costs and ongoing maintenance costs," Legal Factors ... rather than end with "for Web Accessibility" "mandating Web Accessibility" Regards/HarveyReceived on Friday, 2 April 2004 08:59:03 GMT
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