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From: Harvey Bingham <hbingham@acm.org>
Date: Fri, 02 Apr 2004 08:58:14 -0500
Message-Id: <6.0.3.0.2.20040402084821.01d717f8@pop.rcn.com>
To: "WAI Editors" <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Cc: "Shawn Lawton Henry" <shawn@w3.org>

  Your fingers may have been flying out of sync with your brain!

Second para, first sentence:

organizations (sp)

    by full a      by a full

Introduction:

Third sentence: change "to commitment"   to "for committing"

Third paragraph:  "guideance"   "guidance"

Technical Factors  ..."reduce" use gerunds to get parallel styles: 
"reducing" (2), ...enabling,  ... preparing ..

Financial Factors   clean up text.   "including direct cost savings, 
reduced initial costs and ongoing maintenance costs,"

Legal Factors ... rather than end with "for Web Accessibility"   "mandating
Web Accessibility"

Regards/Harvey
    
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