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Re: [Editorial] Two glossary comments

From: Jon Gunderson <jongund@uiuc.edu>
Date: Wed, 28 Mar 2001 14:32:10 -0600
Message-Id: <4.3.1.2.20010328143158.0361ff00@staff.uiuc.edu>
To: Ian Jacobs <ij@w3.org>, w3c-wai-ua@w3.org
Changes sound fine to me.
Jon


At 02:11 PM 3/28/2001 -0500, Ian Jacobs wrote:
>Hello,
>
>I finally read the glossary of the 23 March 2001 draft [1].
>I don't have any significant complaints (and will make a few
>minor editorial clarifications in the next draft).
>
>Two points caught my eye that I wanted to mention to the WG.
>
>1) The definition of "documentation" reads:
>
>    "Documentation refers to all information provided
>     by the vendor about a product, including all product
>     manuals, installation instructions, the help system,
>     and tutorials."
>
>    This sounds too normative to me. Our documentation
>    *requirements* are expressed by Guideline 12. Those
>    five checkpoints make requirements about (1) what must
>    be in the documentation and (2) the accessibility of
>    the documentation.
>
>    I think the definition needs to be written in a manner
>    that doesn't suggest that it adds requirements (e.g.,
>    that the vendor is required to write tutorials in order
>    to conform).
>
>    Also "all information provided by the vendor about a product"
>    is far too broad. This might include press releases, TV
>    commercials, etc.
>
>    As for other features, the claimant may decide to include
>    or exclude different pieces of documentation based on whether
>    they conform. The only *required* documentation is that required
>    by the checkpoints of Guideline 12.
>
>    Therefore, I propose the following change to the definition:
>
>    <NEW>
>    "Documentation refers to information that supports the
>     use of a product. This information may be found in product
>     manuals, installation instructions, the help system,
>     tutorials, etc. Documentation may be distributed; it may
>     be delivered on CD-ROM or available on the Web. Refer to
>     Guideline 12 for information about documentation requirements.
>    </NEW>
>
>2) We define "document source view" but we don't use it
>     in any of the checkpoints. Checkpoint 2.2 says "provide
>     a view of the text source."
>
>     I propose to leave 2.2 as is and to delete "document source
>     view" from the glossary.
>
>  - Ian
>
>[1] http://www.w3.org/WAI/UA/WD-UAAG10-20010323/
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