To Make it more smooth? <to choose whether(or not) to be notified...? Thanks! Ian Jacobs wrote: <snipped> > > Here's another attempt at revised checkpoint 10.3 text: > > Allow the user to selectively turn on and off notification > of common types of document and view changes. > > [I hate to split the infinitive with the adverb, but it fits > best between "to" and "turn"] > > Then after the checkpoint: > > For example, to choose to be notified (or not) that a > script has been executed, that a new window has been opened, > that a pulldown menu has been opened, that a new frame > has received focus, etc. <snipped> > - Ian > > -- > Ian Jacobs (jacobs@w3.org) http://www.w3.org/People/Jacobs > Tel/Fax: +1 212 684-1814 -- Hands-On Technolog(eye)s Touching The Internet: mailto:poehlman@clark.net Voice: 301.949.7599 ftp://ftp.clark.net/pub/poehlman http://poehlman.clark.net Dynamic Solutions Inc. Best of service for your small business network needs! http://www.dnsolutions.com ---sig off---Received on Friday, 27 August 1999 13:49:00 GMT
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