RE: 2.1 level 3 needs rewording

I like the second proposal

----- Messaggio originale -----
    Da: "Lee Roberts"<leeroberts@roserockdesign.com>
    Inviato: 07/07/04 5.28.50
    A: "jasonw@ariel.ucs.unimelb.edu.au"<jasonw@ariel.ucs.unimelb.edu.au>, "'Web Content Guidelines'"<w3c-wai-gl@w3.org>
    Oggetto: RE: 2.1 level 3 needs rewording
    
    
    I propose the following:
    
    "Design all content functionality to operate with a keyboard or keyboard
    interface."
    
    or
    
    "All content functionality is designed to be operated with a keyboard or
    keyboard interface." 
    
    Lee Roberts
    http://www.applepiecart.com
    http://www.roserockdesign.com
    
    -----Original Message-----
    From: w3c-wai-gl-request@w3.org [mailto:w3c-wai-gl-request@w3.org] On Behalf
    Of Jason White
    Sent: Tuesday, July 06, 2004 9:13 PM
    To: Web Content Guidelines
    Subject: RE: 2.1 level 3 needs rewording
    
    
    Gregg Vanderheiden writes:
     > 
     > 	"1. Content is designed so that it can all be operated from a
     > keyboard or keyboard interface."
     >
    I expect this is the proposal we will be discussing on Thursday.
    
    It could be written:
    "The content is designed so that all of its functionality can be operated
    from a keyboard or keyboard interface."
    or
    "All of the content is designed so that it can be operated from a keyboard
    or keyboard interface."
    or
    "All of the content is designed to be operated from a keyboard or keyboard
    interface."
    etc.
    
    I am not sure which is clearest (including Gregg's original proposal); the
    differences are relatively minor.
    
    
    
    
    
    
    

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