Re: Updated: Complete draft for review: Web Accessibility Basics

Hi All
I see Shawn is making further changes to this document today and it is
coming together well. (
http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics). I have added 3
additional comments to the revised version for discussion.  I am happy to
make changes for next week if you agree to my comments.
Apologies for absence today,
Best wishes
Suzette

On 25 May 2012 19:16, suzette keith <suzette.skeith@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi Shawn and all,
> Thank-you to Shawn - I agree with Helle the revised version is much more
> streamlined and easier to follow and to review.
> As agreed in Action 159 I have changed the example from the user stories
> to improve the range of access needs.
> Also I have added examples to the following section using material from
> Diversity of Users.  I have tried to keep to functional needs in relation
> to web use and avoid a medical model of what and why. Are these reasonable
> examples to engage the interest of the intended audience of developers
> using WebEd?
> Basic Accessibility draft is at
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Basics_draft_2 in section 1.2 Understand
> how people use the Web.
> Regards
> Suzette
>
>
>
> On 25 May 2012 12:31, Helle Bjarnø <jor@socialstyrelsen.dk> wrote:
>
>> I think this new draft2 is much better and find the new version from
>> Shawn much better.
>> Cheers
>> Helle
>>
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>> -----Oprindelig meddelelse-----
>> Fra: Shawn Henry [mailto:shawn@w3.org]
>> Sendt: 21. maj 2012 18:26
>> Til: EOWG (E-mail)
>> Emne: Updated: Complete draft for review: Web Accessibility Basics
>>
>>  Hi all,
>>
>> First, reminders:
>> * The primary audience for this page is individual developers who are
>> already working in the field (as opposed to new students) (which is why the
>> business case is at the end)
>> * Approach: Briefly introduce key topics and documents, and encourage
>> readers to follow the links to read the docs.
>> * We'd like to use wording from approved WAI publications where it works,
>> rather than using lots of new wording on this page. (for consistency and to
>> shortcut additional vetting needed)
>>
>> I think we were starting to stray from these. Based on comments from
>> Vicki in the wiki and from Sharron via e-mail, and getting back to the
>> approach that we previously defined, I've take an edit pass at the
>> document. Since it is a fairly radical edit, I left the current draft as is
>> and put the new version in a separate wiki page at:
>>     http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Basics_draft_2
>>
>> To make it easier to read, I also removed comments from that new version.
>>
>> Please review this edited Basics draft this week and either:
>> * add comments throughout the original page
>> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics
>> * add comments in the discussion tab of the new version
>> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Talk:Basics_draft_2
>> * send comments in e-mail
>>
>> Let's see if we can get agreement on this page this week.
>>
>> Thanks!
>> ~Shawn
>>
>>
>> -------- Original Message --------
>> Subject:        Complete draft for review: Web Accessibility Basics
>> Date:   Mon, 14 May 2012 11:04:00 -0500
>> From:   Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
>> To:     EOWG (E-mail) <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
>>
>>
>>
>>  Hi EOWG,
>>
>> Suzette and I have finished our edits from last week's EOWG
>> teleconference on the Web Accessibility Basics page at:
>>     http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics
>>
>> There are several points for review and comment marked in the document
>> with @@ Feel free to add your comments directly in the wiki page, or send
>> by e-mail if that's much easier for you.
>>
>> My edits are listed below:
>>
>> * Changed "Accessibility principles" to "Accessibility requirements" at
>> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics#Accessibility_requirements
>> * Added "Key resources" subhead under there and edited the text -- it
>> still needs work, though
>> * Added "{@@ review note: how can we make this section stronger? and
>> encourage people to read the principles page? ~shawn}"
>>
>> * Edited
>> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics#The_essential_components_of_web_accessibility
>> (at the bottom of the page are previous drafts of that section: heading
>> 2: {@@[another version for consideration] Essential components - "the big
>> picture"} and heading 2: {@@ [a previous version] The essential components
>> of web accessibility} )
>>
>> * For intro paragraph under "Understand how people use the Web" at
>> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics#Understand_how_people_use_the_WebI added some ideas after Suzette's edit.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> ~Shawn
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