Re: Updated: Complete draft for review: Web Accessibility Basics

Hi Shawn and all,
Thank-you to Shawn - I agree with Helle the revised version is much more
streamlined and easier to follow and to review.
As agreed in Action 159 I have changed the example from the user stories to
improve the range of access needs.
Also I have added examples to the following section using material from
Diversity of Users.  I have tried to keep to functional needs in relation
to web use and avoid a medical model of what and why. Are these reasonable
examples to engage the interest of the intended audience of developers
using WebEd?
Basic Accessibility draft is at
http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Basics_draft_2in section 1.2
Understand how people use the Web.
Regards
Suzette



On 25 May 2012 12:31, Helle Bjarnø <jor@socialstyrelsen.dk> wrote:

> I think this new draft2 is much better and find the new version from Shawn
> much better.
> Cheers
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> -----Oprindelig meddelelse-----
> Fra: Shawn Henry [mailto:shawn@w3.org]
> Sendt: 21. maj 2012 18:26
> Til: EOWG (E-mail)
> Emne: Updated: Complete draft for review: Web Accessibility Basics
>
>  Hi all,
>
> First, reminders:
> * The primary audience for this page is individual developers who are
> already working in the field (as opposed to new students) (which is why the
> business case is at the end)
> * Approach: Briefly introduce key topics and documents, and encourage
> readers to follow the links to read the docs.
> * We'd like to use wording from approved WAI publications where it works,
> rather than using lots of new wording on this page. (for consistency and to
> shortcut additional vetting needed)
>
> I think we were starting to stray from these. Based on comments from Vicki
> in the wiki and from Sharron via e-mail, and getting back to the approach
> that we previously defined, I've take an edit pass at the document. Since
> it is a fairly radical edit, I left the current draft as is and put the new
> version in a separate wiki page at:
>     http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Basics_draft_2
>
> To make it easier to read, I also removed comments from that new version.
>
> Please review this edited Basics draft this week and either:
> * add comments throughout the original page
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics
> * add comments in the discussion tab of the new version
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Talk:Basics_draft_2
> * send comments in e-mail
>
> Let's see if we can get agreement on this page this week.
>
> Thanks!
> ~Shawn
>
>
> -------- Original Message --------
> Subject:        Complete draft for review: Web Accessibility Basics
> Date:   Mon, 14 May 2012 11:04:00 -0500
> From:   Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
> To:     EOWG (E-mail) <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
>
>
>
>  Hi EOWG,
>
> Suzette and I have finished our edits from last week's EOWG teleconference
> on the Web Accessibility Basics page at:
>     http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics
>
> There are several points for review and comment marked in the document
> with @@ Feel free to add your comments directly in the wiki page, or send
> by e-mail if that's much easier for you.
>
> My edits are listed below:
>
> * Changed "Accessibility principles" to "Accessibility requirements" at
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics#Accessibility_requirements
> * Added "Key resources" subhead under there and edited the text -- it
> still needs work, though
> * Added "{@@ review note: how can we make this section stronger? and
> encourage people to read the principles page? ~shawn}"
>
> * Edited
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics#The_essential_components_of_web_accessibility
> (at the bottom of the page are previous drafts of that section: heading 2:
> {@@[another version for consideration] Essential components - "the big
> picture"} and heading 2: {@@ [a previous version] The essential components
> of web accessibility} )
>
> * For intro paragraph under "Understand how people use the Web" at
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Web_Accessibility_Basics#Understand_how_people_use_the_WebI added some ideas after Suzette's edit.
>
> Cheers,
> ~Shawn
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