[wbs] response to 'EOWG Comments on WCAG 2.0 Supporting Documents, 11 December 2008 Draft'

The following answers have been successfully submitted to 'EOWG Comments on
WCAG 2.0 Supporting Documents, 11 December 2008 Draft' (Education and
Outreach Working Group) for Shawn Henry.



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Overall Comments
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 * ( ) I reviewed WCAG 2.0 and do not have any comments for EOWG
discussion.
 * (x) I reviewed WCAG 2.0 and have comments below for EOWG discussion.
 * ( ) I pass on the opportuntiy to review WCAG 2.0.

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WCAG 2.0 Quick Reference
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Comments on the Quick Reference:

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location: Introduction
current wording: LOTS!
suggested revision:
Suggestion:
<p>
This WCAG 2.0 Quick Reference lists all of the requirements (called
"success criteria") from the latest _Web Content Accessibility Guidelines
(WCAG) 2.0 Working Draft_. It also lists techniques to meet the
requirements, and "Understanding" links to descriptions, examples, and
resources. You can customize the list for your specific situation by
selecting which technologies you are using in your Web project, and the
_levels_ and techniques that you want included in the list.
<p>
See the _Overview of WCAG 2.0 Documents_ for an introduction to WCAG 2.0
and supporting documents, including more information about this Quick
Reference.
<p>
Note that all techniques are informative; that is, you don’t have to
follow them. <strong>Please see the _“Sufficient and Advisory
Techniques” section of Introduction to Understanding WCAG 2.0_ for
important information about the techniques.</strong>
</p>
rationale: having such a long introduction is counter to a primary goal
with the "Quick Reference" which is to help make WCAg 2.0 approacheable.

location: title
current wording: WCAG 2.0 Quick Reference: A customizable list of WCAG 2.0
requirements (Success Criteria) and techniques
suggested revision: How to Meet WCAG 2.0: A customizable list of WCAG 2.0
requirements (Success Criteria) and techniques
rationale: This is the link text to get here, it's more descriptive of
what it actually is; it avoids negative reactions to such a large document
called "Quick"...

location: customization options
suggested revision: allow users to filter out HTML techniques
rationale: lets users filter out a bunch of info that is not necessary in
certain use cases, e.g., wanting to look up only multimedia or CSS related
issues.






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Understanding WCAG 2.0
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Comments on Understanding WCAG 2.0:

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Techniques for WCAG 2.0
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Comments on Techniques for WCAG 2.0:

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These answers were last modified on 25 January 2008 at 16:13:58 U.T.C.
by Shawn Henry

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Received on Friday, 25 January 2008 16:17:18 UTC