[wbs] response to 'EOWG Comments on WCAG 2.0, 11 December 2008 Draft'

The following answers have been successfully submitted to 'EOWG Comments on
WCAG 2.0, 11 December 2008 Draft' (Education and Outreach Working Group)
for Shawn Henry.



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Overall Comments
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 * ( ) I reviewed WCAG 2.0 and do not have any comments for EOWG
discussion.
 * (x) I reviewed WCAG 2.0 and have comments below for EOWG discussion.
 * ( ) I pass on the opportuntiy to review WCAG 2.0.

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WCAG 2.0 Abstract and Introduction
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WCAG 2.0 Guidelines section
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Comments on the Principles, Guidelines, and Success Criteria:

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location: Guideline 1.1
current wording: "Guideline 1.1 Text Alternatives: Provide text
alternatives for any non-text content so that it can be changed into other
forms people need, such as large print, braille, speech, symbols or simpler
language"
suggested revision: "Guideline 1.1 Text Alternatives: Provide text
alternatives for any non-text content"
rationale: The rationale isn't included with the other Guidelines or SC.
(Also , it is easier to skim without it, and many people know this
already.)




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WCAG 2.0 Conformance section
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Comments on the Conformance section

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WCAG 2.0 Glossary and other Appendices
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Comments on the Glossary, Acknowledgements, and References.

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These answers were last modified on 25 January 2008 at 16:08:35 U.T.C.
by Shawn Henry

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Received on Friday, 25 January 2008 16:11:20 UTC