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Concepts editor's draft synch with Primer

From: Frank Manola <fmanola@mitre.org>
Date: Fri, 25 Jul 2003 09:06:04 -0400
Message-ID: <3F212B3C.9020906@mitre.org>
To: gk@ninebynine.org, w3c-rdfcore-wg@w3.org, jjc@hpl.hp.com

The July 22 Concepts draft (still) refers to "Figure 5 from the 
[RDF-PRIMER]" (both in the text and the figure caption).

a.  The reference should actually be to Figure 6 in the Primer (it was 
Figure 6 in the LC Primer too).  Alternatively, you could make the 
reference less specific and refer to "the following example from Section 
2.3 of [RDF-PRIMER]".

b.  The figure itself needs to be updated (the Concepts figure, taken 
from an older Primer version, uses the term "zip", while the text below 
it refers to "POSTALCODE".)  Using Figure 6 from the current Primer 
editor's draft would fix this.

--Frank

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