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Re: review comments on rdf-syntax-grammar (version of 25 Mar)

From: Graham Klyne <Graham.Klyne@MIMEsweeper.com>
Date: Sun, 24 Mar 2002 16:45:14 +0000
Message-Id: <5.1.0.14.2.20020324164320.0387bcd0@joy.songbird.com>
To: Dave Beckett <dave.beckett@bristol.ac.uk>
Cc: <w3c-rdfcore-wg@w3.org> 
At 01:33 PM 3/24/02 +0000, Dave Beckett wrote:
>I reworded it several times and it is still too long.  I might give
>up and go for bullets which interrupts the flow but might make it clearer.

FWIW, I don't think "flow" is a prime requisite for specification 
text:  clarity and clear enunciation of key points - as with bullets - are, 
I believe, more important.

#g


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Graham Klyne
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Received on Sunday, 24 March 2002 14:10:00 EST

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