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minor typos in CR-xml-c14n-20001026

From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
Date: Sun, 29 Oct 2000 18:10:16 -0800
Message-Id: <p05010401b6228572d241@[204.210.33.45]>
To: jboyer@PureEdge.com
Cc: w3c-ietf-xmldsig@w3.org, w3t-comm@w3.org
Below are a few minor typos in the "Canonical XML Version 1.0" [1]
Candidate Recommendation. I missed some in an earlier reading.

"White space" seems to be two words in the XML Recommendations, but
I don't have a proper reference for you yet, other than those.
It's mainly one word in XHTML 1.0 so I did not point it out below.

1.
XML Namespaces Recommendation ->
XML namespaces Recommendation or Namespaces in XML Recommendation

1.1 list item 8
Whitespace ... are normalized ->
Whitespace ... is normalized

1.1 list item 9
linefeed -> line feed
[see http://www.unicode.org/charts/PDF/U0000.pdf]

1.3
"...This problem may be of concern in certain applications
     since a canonical form and its canonical form are
     equivalent."
[Does this mean the canonical form of the canonical form, or
the canonical form of certain applications?]

2.1 par. 4 list item 1
linefeeds -> line feeds

2.3 par. 4 list item 4
double quote -> quotation mark (three times)
[see http://www.unicode.org/charts/PDF/U0000.pdf]

2.3 par. 4 list item 6
The opening PI symbol (<? ->
The opening PI symbol (<?)

2.4 par. 3
in XML 1.0 and the Namespaces Recommendations
in the XML 1.0 and Namespaces in XML Recommendations

The example in 3.3 uses the University of Victoria
(http://www.uvic.ca). You might consider example.org
which is registered to IANA for examples.
See http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2606.txt

3.4 list item 2
double quotes -> quotation marks

3.4 par. 3
[XML Errata, E70] -> [XML]

3.4 par. 4
single quote -> apostrophe

3.6 par. 2
copyright symbol -> copyright sign
[see http://www.unicode.org/charts/PDF/U0080.pdf]

3.7 list item 2
xml namespace -> XML namespace (?)

4. and 4.1 par. 2
InfoSet -> Infoset

4.3
linefeed -> line feed

4.4 par. 2
occurences -> occurrences

4.8
XML Names specification ->
XML namespace specification or
Namespaces in XML specification

5. CharModel
ed. Martin J. Dürst, François Yergeau
eds. Martin J. Dürst, François Yergeau

5. Infoset
InfoSet -> Infoset

5. XML
     Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0, W3C Recommendation.
     eds. Tim Bray, Jean Paoli, and C. M. Sperberg-McQueen. 10
     February 1998. http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml.
becomes:
     Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0 (Second Edition),
     W3C Recommendation. eds. Tim Bray, Jean Paoli, C. M. Sperberg-McQueen
     and Eve Maler. 6 October 2000. http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml.

5. XML Errata can be omitted.

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/CR-xml-c14n-20001026

Best wishes for your project,

-- 
Susan Lesch - mailto:lesch@w3.org  tel:+1.858.483.4819
World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) - http://www.w3.org/
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