Having read the draft, I found a few typos, see above. More interesting comments on content matters will follow ;-) Section 2.2.1, second paragraph, last line: Right parenthesis has to be removed. Section 4.3.3, first paragraph: "type" must be replaced with "Type" Section 4.3.3, last but one paragraph: For "Type" attribute a fixed width font should be used. Section 6.4.1, identifier: The link should also include the "dsa" fragid Section 6.4.1, DTD comment: Seems to be a victim of copy/paste ;-) Gregor -- --------------------------------------------------------------- Gregor Karlinger mailto://gregor.karlinger@iaik.at Institute for Applied Information Processing and Communications Austria ---------------------------------------------------------------
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