Re: Issue 2.5_language, was: ID: draft-ietf-webdav-bind-05

Yes, we can simplify that.  In particular, I would just move
the second sentence of the last paragraph to the end of the second 
paragraph,
and then delete the rest of the last paragraph. 

Cheers,
Geoff

Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de> wrote on 06/23/2004 12:09:47 PM:

> Geoff,
> 
> looking at 
> <http://greenbytes.de/tech/webdav/draft-ietf-webdav-bind-latest.
> html#rfc.issue.2.5_language>...
> 
> Can we remove the first sentence from the last paragraph 
> (<http://greenbytes.de/tech/webdav/draft-ietf-webdav-bind-latest.
> html#rfc.section.2.5.p.6>) 
> without losing semantics?
> 
> Or is there another simple way to avoid the repeating "Although 
> [RFC2518] allows a MOVE on a collection to be a non-atomic operation, a 
> MOVE implemented as a REBIND MUST be atomic."? (the same statement was 
> already made in a more general way two paragraphs earlier).
> 
> Best regards, Julian
> 
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