Issue 2.5_language, was: ID: draft-ietf-webdav-bind-05

Geoff,

looking at 
<http://greenbytes.de/tech/webdav/draft-ietf-webdav-bind-latest.html#rfc.issue.2.5_language>...

Can we remove the first sentence from the last paragraph 
(<http://greenbytes.de/tech/webdav/draft-ietf-webdav-bind-latest.html#rfc.section.2.5.p.6>) 
without losing semantics?

Or is there another simple way to avoid the repeating "Although 
[RFC2518] allows a MOVE on a collection to be a non-atomic operation, a 
MOVE implemented as a REBIND MUST be atomic."? (the same statement was 
already made in a more general way two paragraphs earlier).

Best regards, Julian

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