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Re: sentence syntax

From: Henri Fallon <henri@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 12 Feb 2003 22:22:09 +0000
To: Offer Kaye <oferk@oren.co.il>
Cc: site-comments@w3.org
Message-ID: <20030212222209.GI22006@w3.org>

On Wed, Feb 12, 2003 at 11:47:10AM +0200, Offer Kaye wrote:
> In your page:
> http://www.w3.org/MarkUp/#html4
> In the first paragraph under the HTML 4.01 heading, the last sentence reads:
> "This allowed us to reduce the size of the XHTML 1.0 spec very
> considerably."
> 
> I think this would be better if re-written as:
> "This allowed us to considerably reduce the size of the XHTML 1.0 spec."

We have a very strong policy of non altering published technical reports
but we appreciate your reporting.

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