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sentence syntax

From: Offer Kaye <oferk@oren.co.il>
Date: Wed, 12 Feb 2003 11:47:10 +0200
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Hi,
In your page:
http://www.w3.org/MarkUp/#html4
In the first paragraph under the HTML 4.01 heading, the last sentence reads:
"This allowed us to reduce the size of the XHTML 1.0 spec very
considerably."

I think this would be better if re-written as:
"This allowed us to considerably reduce the size of the XHTML 1.0 spec."

Hope this helps :-)
Offer Kaye
Received on Wednesday, 12 February 2003 04:53:06 GMT

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