I've checked in an editor's draft that includes my attempt to address Michael Kay's comment #8 on sections 1 and 2, I've reworded Section 2.2 (the first three paragraphs), Section 2.6.1, and added a new Appendix A.3. Anyone unhappy with the new text? (And, Mike, are you *happy* with the new text :-) Be seeing you, norm -- Norman Walsh <ndw@nwalsh.com> | Throughout history the world has been http://nwalsh.com/ | laid waste to ensure the triumph of | conceptions that are now as dead as the | men that died for them.--Henry De | MontherlantReceived on Monday, 1 October 2007 18:31:15 GMT
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