- From: Norman Walsh <ndw@nwalsh.com>
- Date: Mon, 10 Nov 2008 08:06:23 -0500
- To: public-xml-processing-model-comments@w3.org
Received on Monday, 10 November 2008 13:09:38 UTC
Toman_Vojtech@emc.com writes:
>>
>> <para><error code="D0029">It is a <glossterm>dynamic error</glossterm>
>> if the document referenced by a <tag>p:data</tag> element does not
>> exist, cannot be accessed, or cannot be encoded as specified.</error>
>> </para>
>>
>
> Maybe it would be better to use "resource" instead of "document"?
>
> <para><error code="D0029">It is a <glossterm>dynamic error</glossterm>
> if the *resource* referenced by a <tag>p:data</tag> element does not
> exist, cannot be accessed, or cannot be encoded as specified.</error>
> </para>
Done.
Be seeing you,
norm
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Received on Monday, 10 November 2008 13:09:38 UTC