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[closed] Re: section 3.2

From: Norman Walsh <ndw@nwalsh.com>
Date: Sun, 21 Dec 2008 15:23:27 -0500
To: public-xml-processing-model-comments@w3.org
Message-ID: <m2prjlb7ls.fsf@nwalsh.com>
"Dave Pawson" <dave.pawson@gmail.com> writes:

> "The types of an p:pipelines or p:declare-steps that are imported into
> the library."
>
> Unclear/grammatical? Suggest
>
> The type of a p:pipeline or a p:declare-step that is imported into the library.

No, I think it needs to be plural, I fixed it like this:

  The types of p:pipelines or p:declare-steps that are imported into
  the library.

Thanks!

                                        Be seeing you,
                                          norm

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