Re: First draft of xml-model note

|1 Introduction
|
|   (This section is non-normative.)
|
|   There are several document schema definition languages in common use today
|   that can be used to specify one or more validation processes performed
|   against Extensible Markup Language (XML) documents. Some schema languages
|   provide their own syntax (DTD, W3C XML Schema) and some languages (RELAX

                            ^ for associating schemas with documents

[...]
|           An [30]xml-model processor may be part of a larger XML
|           application, or may function independently. In either case,
|           [Definition: an application is the consumer of the
|           pseudo-attribute analysis defined in this specification.]

Perhaps s/analysis/information/

|B Examples (Non-Normative)
|
|   Example: Multiple schemas associated
|
| <?xml version="1.0"?>
| <?xml-model href="http://www.docbook.org/xml/5.0/rng/docbook.rng"?>
| <?xml-model href="http://www.docbook.org/xml/5.0/rng/docbook.xsd"?>

Perhaps include the types?

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