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Comments on draft-duerst-iri-bis-02

From: Felix Sasaki <fsasaki@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 18 Dec 2007 17:13:42 +0900
Message-ID: <47678136.1000503@w3.org>
To: public-iri@w3.org
CC: public-i18n-core@w3.org, public-xml-core-wg@w3.org

Hello Martin, all,

some minor, editorial comments on draft-duerst-iri-bis-02 below.

- abstract
Probably delete the word "new"?

- sec. 7.2
change "each character each character" to "each character".

- sec. 7.3
I guess @@@@ is the part you were referring to in your mail
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-i18n-core/2007OctDec/0237.html
http://www.w3.org/mid/f5b8x4usedn.fsf@hildegard.inf.ed.ac.uk
(the link to the above mail does not work for me)
that is, the part which is still under discussion with XML Core?

- sec. 10
probably replace "RFC3491" in
"specific to the domain name part, see [RFC3491"
with "RFC3491 or its successor", given the current discussion on IDNs?

- sec. 11
"This document is a Internationalization Working Group", and "I18N 
Working Group": insert "Core"?

Hth,

Felix
Received on Tuesday, 18 December 2007 08:14:05 UTC

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