Comments on draft-duerst-iri-bis-02

Hello Martin, all,

some minor, editorial comments on draft-duerst-iri-bis-02 below.

- abstract
Probably delete the word "new"?

- sec. 7.2
change "each character each character" to "each character".

- sec. 7.3
I guess @@@@ is the part you were referring to in your mail
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-i18n-core/2007OctDec/0237.html
http://www.w3.org/mid/f5b8x4usedn.fsf@hildegard.inf.ed.ac.uk
(the link to the above mail does not work for me)
that is, the part which is still under discussion with XML Core?

- sec. 10
probably replace "RFC3491" in
"specific to the domain name part, see [RFC3491"
with "RFC3491 or its successor", given the current discussion on IDNs?

- sec. 11
"This document is a Internationalization Working Group", and "I18N 
Working Group": insert "Core"?

Hth,

Felix

Received on Tuesday, 18 December 2007 08:14:05 UTC