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Comments on draft-duerst-iri-bis-02

From: Felix Sasaki <fsasaki@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 18 Dec 2007 17:13:42 +0900
Message-ID: <47678136.1000503@w3.org>
To: public-iri@w3.org
CC: public-i18n-core@w3.org, public-xml-core-wg@w3.org

Hello Martin, all,

some minor, editorial comments on draft-duerst-iri-bis-02 below.

- abstract
Probably delete the word "new"?

- sec. 7.2
change "each character each character" to "each character".

- sec. 7.3
I guess @@@@ is the part you were referring to in your mail
(the link to the above mail does not work for me)
that is, the part which is still under discussion with XML Core?

- sec. 10
probably replace "RFC3491" in
"specific to the domain name part, see [RFC3491"
with "RFC3491 or its successor", given the current discussion on IDNs?

- sec. 11
"This document is a Internationalization Working Group", and "I18N 
Working Group": insert "Core"?


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