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Re: Position Paper for W3C Workshop on Identity

From: Henry Story <henry.story@bblfish.net>
Date: Thu, 21 Apr 2011 17:20:08 +0200
Cc: WebID Incubator Group WG <public-xg-webid@w3.org>
Message-Id: <C3FCC276-D2D8-47FE-A478-3E076799E55D@bblfish.net>
To: Dominik Tomaszuk <ddooss@wp.pl>

On 21 Apr 2011, at 16:43, Dominik Tomaszuk wrote:

> On 21.04.2011 12:51, Henry Story wrote:
>> New version with some changes:
>> 
>> http://bblfish.net/tmp/2011/04/21/
> My cursory commands:
> 1. section 2 - point 1 - noted that this is Alice's protected HTTPS resource. It will be clearer.
> 2. section 2 - point 2 - as above (resource server -> Alice's resource server)
> 3. section 2 - fig 1. - IMHO Alice's Web Server -> Alice's Web Application Web Server
> 4. section 2 - point 5 - remove link https://bob.net/is/bob (it links nowhere)
> 5. section 2 - last paragraph https -> HTTPS
> 6. section 2 - URL -> URI (... can be an HTTPS URI...)
> 7. section 3 - IMHO subsection 3.3 should be 3.2 (3.2 TLS, 3.3 Comparison to OpenID)
> 8. subsection 3.3 https -> HTTPS
> 9. subsection 3.3 title TLS -> Transport Layer Security

Ok for most of the above. I think  Web Application Server is better than resource server but might as well
just stick to Web Server and save a word

when we are speaking of URLs we might as well use the world, instead of going through the superclass and then
restricting it. :-)

> 10. document is not valid (I can fix it) [1]

Thanks. I'll let you look at that when we are closer to the end, so that we don't need to do it twice.

> 
> [1] http://www.w3.org/2011/identity-ws/#paper
> 
> Dominik 'domel' Tomaszuk

Social Web Architect
http://bblfish.net/
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