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Re: Tom's actions re: Benefits review

From: Thomas Baker <tbaker@tbaker.de>
Date: Thu, 26 May 2011 09:56:09 -0400
To: Thomas Baker <tbaker@tbaker.de>
Cc: Uldis Bojars <captsolo@gmail.com>, public-xg-lld <public-xg-lld@w3.org>
Message-ID: <20110526135609.GA26954@julius>
On Wed, May 25, 2011 at 09:55:40AM -0400, Thomas Baker wrote:
> >    <scribe> ACTION: Tom to ask Hideaki or Dickson to review
> >    [21]http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/wiki/Benefits recorded in
> >    [22]http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/minutes/2011/05/19-lld-minutes.html#action06]
> 
> On second thought, it seemed to be too short to ask for a review, so 
> I will make a few comments on Benefits myself.

This section is looking pretty good.  I couldn't resist wordsmithing
to expand acronyms, smooth a few rough edges, and fill out a few unfinished
thoughts - see the diff at [1].

Tom

[1] http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/wiki/index.php?title=Benefits&diff=4970&oldid=4667
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