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ISSUE: [Guidelines] 5041 " Editorial change proposals for the guidelines document"

From: Felix Sasaki <fsasaki@w3.org>
Date: Thu, 13 Sep 2007 00:41:30 +0900
Message-ID: <46E808AA.4040109@w3.org>
To: "public-ws-policy@w3.org" <public-ws-policy@w3.org>

See also http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=5041 .

Target: Guidelines

Description: Editorial change proposals for the guidelines document.

Sec. 1:
"Each policy alternative a collection of policy assertions." to
"Each policy alternative is a collection of policy assertions."
Sec. 5.1:
"and, a set of valid policy subjects" to
"and a set of valid policy subjects"
""Foo" has the same semantic " to
""Foo" has the same semantics "
Sec. 5.3.1:
"exactly one" to "ExactlyOne"
"all" to "All"
Sec. 5.5.1:
"compatability " to "compatibility"
Sec. 5.6.1 needs update with "outstanding AI" mentioned in editorial 
note, or delition of that note.
Sec. 6.1:
"The contents of the parameter are static and allows reuse in different 
security scenerios" to
"The content of the parameter are static and allows reuse in different 
security scenarios"
App. C:
Update reference to SWASDL to "W3C Recommendation 28 August 2007"

Felix
Received on Wednesday, 12 September 2007 15:41:40 GMT

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