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Issue 4225 (was RE: Editorial issues in the Framework spec

From: Asir Vedamuthu <asirveda@microsoft.com>
Date: Mon, 15 Jan 2007 13:02:32 -0800
Message-ID: <1E0F0378382054439F14D5450650478F0BFD7D0F@RED-MSG-42.redmond.corp.microsoft.com>
To: Daniel Roth <daniel.roth@microsoft.com>, <public-ws-policy@w3.org>
[Added Issue Number to the Subject]



From: public-ws-policy-request@w3.org
[mailto:public-ws-policy-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Daniel Roth
Sent: Saturday, January 13, 2007 10:17 PM
To: public-ws-policy@w3.org
Subject: Editorial issues in the Framework spec


In reviewing the LC draft for the Framework spec we identified the
following editorial items:


Item 1: Section 4.3.4 - @Digest is not of type xs:boolean

Solution: s/xs:boolean/xs:base64Binary


Item 2: Section 5.5 - Example does not have namespace prefixes

Solution: Prefix Policy elements with the wsp namespace prefix


Item 3: Section 4, 1st Paragraph - "policy expression" should be plural

Solution: s/policy expression/policy expressions


Item 4: Section 4.3.3 - Negative motivation for compact policy

Solution: Remove the sentence: "In some instances, complex policies
expressed in normal form can get relatively large and hard to manage."


Item 5: Section 4, 1st Paragraph - List of sections in the text is
inconsistent with latest content and duplicates TOC

Solution: Remove the phrase: "namely (i) Normal form of a policy
expression (ii) Compact form of a policy expression (iii) Identification
of policy expressions and (iv) Policy intersection."


We recommend that these items be given to the editorial team


Daniel Roth

Received on Monday, 15 January 2007 21:03:19 UTC

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