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Editorial issues in the Framework spec

From: Daniel Roth <Daniel.Roth@microsoft.com>
Date: Sat, 13 Jan 2007 22:16:52 -0800
To: "public-ws-policy@w3.org" <public-ws-policy@w3.org>
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In reviewing the LC draft for the Framework spec we identified the following editorial items:

Item 1: Section 4.3.4 - @Digest is not of type xs:boolean
Solution: s/xs:boolean/xs:base64Binary

Item 2: Section 5.5 - Example does not have namespace prefixes
Solution: Prefix Policy elements with the wsp namespace prefix

Item 3: Section 4, 1st Paragraph - "policy expression" should be plural
Solution: s/policy expression/policy expressions

Item 4: Section 4.3.3 - Negative motivation for compact policy expressions
Solution: Remove the sentence: "In some instances, complex policies expressed in normal form can get relatively large and hard to manage."

Item 5: Section 4, 1st Paragraph - List of sections in the text is inconsistent with latest content and duplicates TOC
Solution: Remove the phrase: "namely (i) Normal form of a policy expression (ii) Compact form of a policy expression (iii) Identification of policy expressions and (iv) Policy intersection."

We recommend that these items be given to the editorial team

Daniel Roth
Received on Sunday, 14 January 2007 06:17:01 GMT

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